More about Haiku

 

Zen Buddhists began using Haiku in the 17th century after adapting it from
a popular form of verse known as Renga.
Haiku is a very short poetic form, consisting of three lines, usually of 5, 7, and 5 syllables each, and has a special word which evokes the season. It is probably the shortest poetic form in the world, and its development is native to Japan. The poet must be concise because of the brevity, while concentrating deep spiritual understanding into the poem. The haiku poet usually takes up the changes of nature which have impressed him in order to express the intangible world of the spirit. Haiku presents a pair of contrasting
images--one suggestive of time and place, and the other an observation.

Writing Haiku

The master Masaoka Shiki told his disciples that they had only to look carefully at one scene in nature to be able to produce over 20 Haiku. There are two ways you can compose your first HAIKU, or write your best HAIKU. The first is to study Japanese HAIKU before you try International HAIKU and the second suggests that the appreciation of nature and your own imagination is enough.

Rules:

3-short lines
1-season word
1-cutting word
no rhyme or metaphor
(17 syllables, 5-7-5)

 

An example by Santoka

Looking for the moon
In a lonely autumn sky
- mountain castle lights,


A cutting word is the break in a line such as the hyphen before the word mountain that occurred when the poet saw a mountain castle rather than the moon in the sky. Other English poems use `behold` or `stop` to convey this moment.

Keep the poem simple; try not to distract the reader with simile, metaphor or rhyme, unless it is necessary to convey the image you see. The 5-7-5 syllable rules of Haiku written in Japanese are not as widely accepted by writers of HAIKU in other languages.

To spur your imagination, make a chart of season words that you may want to incorporate into your HAIKU. Fill in a chart with 4 sections, one for each season. Try and write 40 words. What do you like or dislike about the seasons?

Examples of season words

Spring : Flowers

Summer : Sun flowers

Fall : Autumn leaves

Winter : Snow

Once your season words are ready, you are ready to start writing your own Haiku. Keep them short . Line one and two should be different images. Use line 3 to bring the 2 images together. If you like, you can try to use a cutting word such as 'stop' , or punctuation such as the hyphen:

 

 

Here are some examples to get you thinking and on your way.

Railroad crossing bells
stop a mid-summer's day
from rushing on by

 

Majestic antlers
rising from the lily pond
-glint from a rifle

and some from the Haiku masters...

Jump into the sea
Summer is a long way
Go there at once

- Akio Kaneko

The sea at springtime.
All day it rises and falls,
yes, rises and falls.

- Buson

 

The rainy season
Sparrows taking shelter
Raindrops,too

- Kenjiro HIgashi

 

Jump into the sea
Summer is a long way
Go there at once

- Akio Kaneko

 

SO

nature is profound
imagination is fertile
write haiku before winter

 

And Once your Haiku is written, send them here for publication.

More information on how to write Haiku can be found at  http://www. toyomasu.com/haiku

 

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