Revision

The original story describes humanities beginning but no mention of the reason and purpose of children, and the specific God given role of each gender in the human race.

"The Lord God said it isn't good for man to be alone."

I will make a companion for him, a helper suited to his needs and to nourish, protect, and deliver all my children to honor me from one generation to the next.

Then the Lord God caused man to fall into a deep sleep and took one of his ribs and closed up the place from which he removed it, and made the rib into a woman and brought her to the man who was still asleep.

God told the woman her purpose and reason for life was to protect, nourish and bring forward all the gifts of children loaned to her by the creator and to prepare them for their future earthly time.

Before God presented the woman to man he whispered in her ear so only she could hear; "you are the blessed earthly woman and will always find favor with me for each child you bear and love."

"Only you will nurture and protect the children for their time of peace as they develop into human beings of thought."

"You will be present when each child receives its gift of life and their mind, body and soul; in preparation for their journey on earth."

"As the carrier and deliverer of my children you will be blest to have an abundance of compassion to share with your own and also others."

When man awoke he was told; "your purpose and reason for earthly life is to protect, feed, shelter, and keep safe each child given to you in your image and likeness and also an affinity of myself."

"Man was informed he had the responsibility to protect and provide for the needs of the woman and each child as they grow and also change."

"As the male you are to be the role model for each child as the authority for discipline and order in their lives." "You are to dispense punishment when required and also embrace each child with emotions of love and fairness on a daily basis."

"With your helpmate you should introduce each child to your God to form an intimate relationship to seek spiritual guidance and to ask for assistance in decision making and choices of significant import while on earth."

~Chuck Hurley~

 

More Poems By Chuck

Kavitanjali.com

 

© All Rights Reserved
Do not copy