Kavitanjali Chain Poem
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Wondering how His invention* was faring,

God might have looked down and been aghast

He might be working on a better model now

without the mistakes of the past

 

 

Just in case He wants feed back

on how He could improve upon us

why not get some suggestions ready

(though He is not likely to ask Us, I guess)

 

* People

 

 

 

 

Suggestion Box

 

 

Have you seen the traffic in India? Good God 

From every side we are under attack.

We would welcome some more eyes

especially at the back

 

~ S ~

 

 

 

 

Traffic is not so bad, you know,
Its worse when Cows move to and fro!!
They think their dads have bought the roads,
They give free passes only to friends--like Goats.
Soon Monkeys and Camels and Rhinos will join
And the new king of roads will be the Lion.
We'll see the Hippos and Elephants too,
And suggestions will include to drive in the zoo!!

 

 

~ Rachit Arora ~

 

 

 

Back? Oh no, at the back alone
would certainly not do!

We need eyes on our sides, and
every other angle too!

Why? Good heavens, you actually
want to know why?

Ever heard of the term multi-tasking? Go on, do it
only with your eyes. Just try!

~ Rumjhum ~


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